Poetry written on the right-to-life issues has a history worth examining as much as that history of American works on the life issues in other genres. One thinks of Ernest Hemingway's "Hills Like White Elephants" and Lorraine Hansberry's A Raisin in the Sun as the exemplary American short story and drama on abortion. Infanticide and euthanasia fiction and dramatic works are receiving more attention now that the issues have obtained public attention for several decades. Extensive criticism can be found on many of these works, increasingly from the pro-life perspective. The exemplary American poems on the three life issues, however, still need to be discovered, and the accompanying pro-life criticism of them still needs to be generated.
A review of the scholarship shows that, curiously (after thirty years of abortion legal throughout the nine months of pregnancy and an even longer history of abortion agitation), discussing the right-to-life element of various works has not been a direct concern of most scholars. Thus, anyone who begins or continues a discussion of poetry from the pro-life perspective may feel as though he or she is developing ab ovo research. Since it has not been a matter of scholarly concern, poems on the life issues themselves are often difficult to locate. They are "out there"; once in a while, a newsletter will mention this or that poem about one of the life issues, typically abortion. Poems on the life issues have been written, continue to be written, and will be written for as long as the first civil right to life is still hanging in a judicial and legislative limbo, but where are they?
Unfortunately, for the scholar interested in discussing poems on these issues, no easy collection of primary material exists. Poems on the right-to-life issues surface intermittently, but, to continue the metaphor, they still lurk in the murky waters of the American canon, frightened like whales to surface lest they be harpooned by critics, both anti- and pro-life. Maybe these poems hide in the deepest Mariana Trench of literature where no light reaches them not because they are afraid, but because they themselves are aware of their fatal propensities.
The extended metaphor may be a cute idea for a future poem, but this study will attempt to meet that need for a pro-life perspective on contemporary poetry concerned with the life issues. I will use scansion, which is a traditional poetic tool used in formalist criticism, to explicate representative poems on each of the three life issues.1 The art of scansion involves several general rules. First, determining where accents go in a line of poetry depends on regular speech. One would not accent monosyllabic prepositions or articles because in standard American English no one does accent such a word. Second, demarcating metrical feet is often complicated, but a pattern can usually be established if sufficient attention is given to the length of the poetic line and the general intent of the poet.
Finally, after the metrical feet have been determined, certain emotional qualities of the meter can be discussed. For example, the use of the iambic foot, the standard metrical foot in English poetry which consists of an unaccented syllable followed by an accented one, indicates that the poet wishes to achieve a normal reading of a line. A trochaic foot, the reverse of the iambic, signifies that the poet wishes to place stress first in his or her line, thus bringing an alteration to the normal reading of a poetic line, perhaps suggesting heaviness or seriousness to the meter. An anapestic foot, consisting of two unaccented syllables followed by an accented syllable, increases the speed of the line, usually indicating a happier metrical pattern.2
The dactylic foot, the reverse of the anapestic, may convey more heaviness and seriousness than the trochaic foot, since the accent comes first followed by two unaccented syllables. A monosyllabic foot can occur, as well as a spondee, which consists of two accents in a row. The heaviness of the monosyllabic and spondaic feet can indicate a variety of emotions, but the general intent of these feet is to emphasize certain words or syllables for dramatic or profound seriousness. Finally, a pyrrhic foot, consisting of two unaccented syllables in a row, can occur, conveying a sense of emptiness or even a sense of speeding the line along.3
Once I selected scansion as the tool with which to consider the poems, deciding which presentation scheme would control this paper was difficult. Should the poems be presented in alphabetical order of the author's name, in alphabetical order of the life issue, in the historical order of the life issue, or some other scheme? I chose to order the poems for discussion in strict chronological order; doing so will move us from the easiest to the most difficult poem to scan and to discuss, followed by what I think should be a new addition to the canon of poetry on the first life issue. Thus, I will focus first on Madison Julius Cawein's "The Infanticide" (1909), then Dudley Randall's euthanasia poem "To The Mercy Killers" (1973), Marge Piercy's "Right to Life" (1980), and finally Jan Beatty's "An Abortion Attempt by My Mother" (1995).
It may be difficult to believe that one must reach early in the beginning of the twentieth century to find a representative American poem on one of the life issues, but that is what I have done in selecting Madison Julius Cawein's 1909 poem "The Infanticide". Several infanticide poems were worth considering. One can point to the anonymous "The Cruel Mother", but that is a traditional Scottish ballad, falling beyond the scope of this study of American poetry on the life issues. Similarly, Deborah A. Symonds' research into infanticide ballads, such as the "Mary Hamilton" version transcribed in her work, must be removed from study here since it dates from eighteenth century Scotland. I could have used Elizabeth Barrett Browning's 1848 poem "The Runaway Slave at Pilgrim's Point". However, since Browning is not an American author, her work falls beyond the scope of this study, even though the poem, as a vehicle for expressing her opposition to slavery, rebukes Americans who boast freedom for whites yet enslave blacks. Searches for "infanticide" in databases such as 20th Century African-American Poetry, 20th Century American Poetry, and American Poetry 1600-1900 yield "3 matching terms in 2 full texts", "7 matching terms in 7 full texts", and "1 matching [term] in 1 full text" respectively -- all of which are casual references to the activity of killing a child. A search in the online MLA International Bibliography of "infanticide" and "poetry" yields six scholarly articles, but those are secondary sources.
Thus, I am left with an early twentieth century poem which illustrates infanticide as it has been understood since the seventeenth century and as we experience it with greater frequency in our society. The preceding two dependent clauses are necessary, for "infanticide" came into the English language relatively recently to refer to the growing practice, especially noted by British authors, of killing newborn children. Similarly, reading about mothers who kill their children is an increasing topic of concern today. One thinks of contemporary infanticidal mothers who kill their children because of mental illness, frustration with their lovers or husbands, or a sense of powerlessness. Perhaps Cawein's poem is not so dated after all. Today's mother who commits infanticide may find herself in just as helpless or as shameful a situation so that she feels or thinks that the only way out of her dilemma is to kill her child.
Here is the poem as published in Cawein's collection New Poems with my scansion:
-/ -/ -/ -/ -/
She took her babe, the child of shame and sin,
-/ -/ -- -/ -/
And wrapped it warmly in her shawl and went
-/ -/ -/ -/ -- /
From house to house for work. Propriety bent
-/ -/ -- // -/
A look of wonder on her; raised a din
-/ -/ // -/ -/
Of Christian outrage. None would take her in.
/- -/ -/ -/ //
All that she had was gone; had long been spent.
/ -- -/ -- -/ -/
Penniless and hungry by the road she leant,
// -/ -- // -/
No friend to go to and no one of kin.
-/ -/ -/ -/ -/
The babe at last began to cry for food.
-/ -/ -/ // -/
Her breasts were dry; she had no milk to give. --
-/ // -/ // -/
She was so tired and cold. -- What could she do? --
-/ /- -/ -/ -/
...The next day in a pool within a wood
-/ -/ // -/ -/
They found the babe. ... 'Twas hard enough to live,
-/ -/ -/ -- -/
She found, for one; impossible for two. (210)
Technically, this poem presents a stable scansion, and there is little debate concerning the designation of this dominantly iambic pentameter sonnet. One could argue that "Propriety" in the third line could be an amphibrach or just as easily an iamb followed by an anapest. There could be a good argument to justify such a deviation in the meter. The term follows a full stop with the terminal punctuation of the first sentence; moreover, the poet personified the term, showing that he wanted to emphasize it. It is, after all, the propriety of the people to whom the mother goes for help that ultimately leads to her death and the death of the child. Such speculation cannot be justified, though, since other deviations in the meter make the poet's case more strongly.
Perhaps the most noticeable deviations in the regular meter of the poem are the pyrrhic feet, strategically placed to emphasize the powerlessness of the mother. A pyrrhic foot conveys a sense of wasted activity, two unaccented syllables that seem to go nowhere and that do not add to the drama in the poem. The five pyrrhic feet highlight events that lead to the infanticide. The first one, which immediately follows the first syllable of "warmly", should convey a positive connotation, but its position after this positive activity is negated by the nothingness of the pyrrhic foot. The second pyrrhic foot in line four functions similarly to negate the "wonder" and possible help that should attend the mother's condition. Instead, we are drawn to the condemnation that is "raised" against "her" in a spondee immediately following this pyrrhic foot.
The third instance of the pyrrhic foot in line seven is significant for at least two reasons. First, it is placed in a hyperbatonic sentence structure; the tortured syntax mimics the torture that the mother must feel. She has no money and, instead of merely saying that she has no money, when the poet uses the beginning word "Penniless", he conveys the sense that the money has already been spent by the accent of the opening dactyl. Second, I think that the pyrrhic foot in the middle of this line helps further to convey the result of the mother's poverty and hunger. What else can one do besides exist with the nothingness of one's poverty and hunger, expressed by the flat, unaccented syllables of the pyrrhic foot?
The next pyrrhic foot in line eight increases the urgency of the mother's situation especially because the pyrrhic foot is balanced (appropriately in the middle foot) in a line containing two spondees. The mother has on one side, almost literally, "No friend" and, on the other side, "no one of kin". It is interesting that the next line continues the regular iambic pentameter beat, as though the child him- or herself is unaware of the mother's dilemma graphed in the previous line.
The final pyrrhic foot in the last line of the poem increases the sense of hopelessness for the mother, but only after four spondees occur after the perfectly regular iambic line of the one act of the newborn mentioned in the poem. (The five other spondees before the child's perfect line occur over a span of eight lines, while the four spondees heightening the mother's anguish are forced into five lines.) In fact, the last line's pyrrhic foot occurs over the syllables of the word which denotes what chances the mother and the child have of survival. "Impossible", meaning "not able to do", reinforces the idea that the ability "to live" is not possible for the mother and the child; the pyrrhic foot over "able" reinforces even this last portion of a word that already has a negative connotation.
Several other poems on the topic of euthanasia could have been selected for this study, all of which would lend themselves well to scansion, but three conveyed the nineteenth-century sense of the word, and the remaining one illustrates the twentieth century's break from the innocent etymological sense to the deadlier sense of active killing. I could have selected Willis Gaylord Clark's "Euthanasia", printed in the 1846 posthumous collection of his works. However, "euthanasia" had neither the denotation nor the connotation that it has today. In fact, the poem considers "euthanasia" in its etymological sense, that of a happiness in dying, knowing that death is only the gateway to eternal life.4 Similarly, I could have selected Frances Cornford's 1923 poem "The Watch", but the persona's alliterative and spondaic appeal for death is not euthanasia, an effort on the part of a human agent to procure death, as much as it could be construed as the wish of a speaker for what is traditionally called a plea (since it is not objectively a prayer) for a "happy death", a quick release from the pain of suffering. Moreover, her work must be excluded since this granddaughter of Charles Darwin is British and beyond the limit of this study.5
Linda Pastan's 1980 poem "Ethics" could also have been used, since it poses a typical situation ethics question: would someone save "a Rembrandt painting / or an old woman who hadn't many / years left anyhow?" (1112). The persona's ambiguous answer indeed "eschews / the burdens of responsibility" and deflects the care for the elderly that the young should bestow (1112-3). Finally, I could also have chosen David R. Slavitt's 1983 poem "Titanic". The idea promoted in this poem is that we would want to die as those who died in the Titanic disaster because at least we would never be alone in our dying moments; people would always talk about us and rehearse the disaster in tender affection. However, this poem does not concern euthanasia in the contemporary sense of actively killing someone; rather, Slavitt's poem offers us a late twentieth-century perspective of how we should recover the original etymological meaning of "euthanasia" as a "good death". Dudley Randall's 1973 poem "To The Mercy Killers" on the third right-to-life issue, euthanasia, should be explored for three reasons: it directly confronts the issue of euthanasia per se, it offers for the reader's consideration the voice of the person on whom euthanasia would be performed, and the scansion of the poem has several interesting elements not evident in the other euthanasia poems.
Here is the poem as published in Randall's collection After the Killing with my scansion:6
-/ -/ -/ -/ -/
If ever mercy move you murder me,
// -/ -/ -/ -/
I pray you, kindly killers, let me live.
/- -/ -/ -/ -/
Never conspire with death to set me free,
-/ -/ // -/ -/
but let me know such life as pain can give.
/- /- /- / -/ -/
Even though I be a clot, an aching clench,
-/ -/ -/ -/ -/
a stub, a stump, a butt, a scab, a knob,
-/ -/ -/ -/ -/
a screaming pain, a putrefying stench,
// -/ -/ -/ -/
still let me live, so long as life shall throb.
/- /- // /- -- /
Even though I turn such traitor to myself
-/ -/ // -/ -/
as beg to die, do not accomplice me.
/- /- // / -- //
Even though I seem not human, a mute shelf
-/ -/ -/ -/ --
of glucose, bottled blood, machinery
-/ -/ -/ -/ /- /
to swell the lungs and pump the heart -- even so,
// // -/ /- //
do not put out my life. Let me still glow. (10)
Randall's consideration of euthanasia is presented in a strikingly regular iambic pentameter sonnet with deviation in the meter at crucial points. Spondees occur over the phrases "I pray", "such life", "still let", "turn such", "do not" (repeated in lines ten and fourteen), "seem not", "mute shelf", "put out", and "still glow". The combination of these spondees itself reads like a plea embodied in a fractured sentence that could be uttered by one in pain, perhaps even one who is afraid of being a victim of euthanasia. Trochees break the iambic pattern on the words "never", "traitor", and "even" (significantly, after four feet which are iambic and which mimic the beating of a regular circulatory and pulmonary function), and "Let me" (line fourteen). Moreover, trochees are significantly found over the subordinating conjunctions "even though" (used three times in the poem) -- significantly, for this subordinating conjunction phrase signals a condition to be renounced by a subsequent independent clause affirming the opposite of what was stated in the dependent clause. As if to emphasize the object of the humanity being assaulted by a possible euthanasia, a dactyl occurs over the word "human" in line eleven.
Perhaps the item most worth considering in the poem is the variation of meter in two lines (five and thirteen) which are hexameters instead of pentameter. The persona introduces the first of the three conditional clauses in line five: "Even though I be a clot, an aching clench". If one thought negatively about the health situation of the persona, then one would expect a negative outcome in the meter itself. However, the meter does not change dramatically. In fact, although the subordinating conjunctions in this fifth line begin the first of three trochees, the next three lines, which refer to usually disgusting items and effects of illness, are rhythmical iambic pentameter. It is almost as though the persona is celebrating his or her illness, building to a crescendo of terms ordinarily negative in connotation now transformed into positive things. I designate "clot" as a monosyllabic foot for this reason: the litany of terms with which the persona equates him- or herself is epideictic of praise, not terms of scorn.
The same strategy occurs in line eleven, where, although the meter is mostly pentameter, the rhetorical effect of the words "a mute shelf / of glucose, bottled blood, machinery" expand the idea that, "Even though I seem not human", the persona holds to his or her humanity. Interestingly, the last foot of this twelfth line is a pyrrhic foot, matched with the last two syllables of "machinery", as if the persona him- or herself recognizes that the equipment around a person is not as important as the person him- or herself.
Marge Piercy's 1980 poem "Right to Life" is an interesting venture into a poetic exploration of the entire pro-life worldview. The fifth stanza does talk about "a partera" who "is performing a table top abortion on an / unwed mother" (96), but that is the only explicit reference to abortion per se. The poem reads more as an exercise in negation ("A woman is not" begins the first and second stanzas). The poem then asserts women's rights to control their bodies. Why discuss this poem then? In fact, since Piercy's poem addresses the milieu of abortion from the anti-life perspective more than the abortion procedure, I could also have considered Jean Blackwood's 1982 poem "Generation" which addresses the abortion milieu from a pro-life perspective. I think, however, that it would be worthwhile to determine whether there is any poetic merit in this poem, especially since it reads like an excessive political manifesto of the anti-life philosophy.
Little critical attention has been given to this poem, and I hope that the following will increase our appreciation of one of the most politically activist poems which distorts the positions of those who support the first civil right, the right to life. Unfortunately, critics can sometimes get carried away by terminology in their respective literary theory, and commentary on this poem is no exception.7
However, before getting into a politically charged interpretation of the poem, before determining whether there is anything in the poem that, to use deconstructionist terminology, helps us understand how it implodes itself, or before we investigate the oppressive nature of patriarchy (a concern of some categories of an anti-life feminist literary criticism), I think it is necessary to examine the words of the poem itself, and to do so is an objective of formalism criticism.
Naomi Guttman has isolated only two of the poem's eight stanzas (stanzas three and four) for discussion.8 At least two major problems present themselves immediately in the scansion of the poem. One could attack the propriety of using scansion at all, and the other could pose a technical matter which affects the rhetorical value of an interpretation of the poem. First, why even bother to scan a poem which apparently is written in free verse -- especially a feminist poem which would no doubt adhere to the conviction that free verse is a form that poets like Adrienne Rich "saw as less patriarchal and more in tune with her true voice" in which she could express her political views (American Passages 723)? There is no rhyme scheme and no easy designation of the lines as strictly one meter. In fact, the extreme variation from three lines which are trimeter to one which is hexameter could argue against the application of the traditional scansion technique completely. Second, does one accent all instances of the pronoun "you"? Normally, one need not do so since the pronoun is viewed as relatively less important than a proper noun. Here, however, the pronoun must be accented since the intention of the poem is dominantly accusatory.9
Despite these concerns, I think that scanning this poem can help us to evaluate its message in a more substantial way than merely using it as a tool to advance a particular ideology as Guttman has done. There are two aspects unveiled by scansion worth considering. The first aspect that scanning the poem makes evident is the significant number of spondees, especially when the second person pronoun is immediately followed by a present tense verb. Spondees are meant to convey not so much merely heaviness in poetry (the traditional understanding of the function of the dactyl), but a heaviness and a more serious purpose in the language used. This intentional seriousness can be shown in the second and fourth lines in each stanza, where "You put" and "You slice" in the third stanza and "You lay" and "You value" (the first syllable of the polysyllabic verb being accented) in the fourth stanza, illustrate this pronoun and present tense verb combination.10
The second aspect is a corollary of the first. The use of the second person pronoun is particularly striking not only because it works to create spondaic feet, but also because in several instances the pronoun is a monosyllabic foot, drawing attention in two directions: not only towards the person to whom the persona in the poem is speaking, but also away from the persona him- or herself. Thus, the persona attempts to divert attention away from his or her responsibility (or, perhaps, from his or her own promotion or involvement in the killing of unborn children) to an entity outside the poem who is constantly being accused of having committed some moral wrongs. The first foot of the third stanza is the monosyllabic foot "You" which sets the accusatory tone for the rest of the poem; it is someone (or it could be a second person plural use of the pronoun) designated as "You" who does the planting.11
Moreover, the two instances where the second-person possessive pronoun "your" is used should be noted. The eighth lines of both stanzas contain some form of the possessive pronoun "your" and "yours". In the third stanza "yours" is not immediately juxtaposed with its corresponding noun, further isolating the persona from the person or persons being addressed. Similarly, although the use of "your" in the fourth stanza does have the noun it describes immediately following it, the line is a run-on, and the noun which the "your" describes is removed from the reader's vision if not his or her immediate intellectual understanding by being placed on the next line.
The above discussion may help to balance the ideological blathering of critics like Guttman, but I think that more interesting commentary on the poem can be made of another stanza. The sixth and seventh stanzas of the poem summarize the political intent of the poem, and, although the final, seventh stanza stresses the power that a woman should have, the sixth stanza is fascinating since it views the unborn child not as a potential force for good in the world, but as the (not the indefinite article, but the definite article) cause of evil in the world.
What is noticeable about this sixth stanza, besides the invective, is that, when scanned, it is largely pentameter, the normal measure for poetry in English. Unlike the other stanzas discussed above (three and four), where fourteen spondees are scattered across the two stanzas, this diatribe against the unborn child to be transformed into some kind of born criminal or monster politician contains only three spondees in the largely iambic meter (twenty-two feet). Can anything significant be said of spondees over the phrases "all born", "downstream", and "world burns" -- except that the responsibility for the crimes of the unwanted child once born is deflected from his or her condition to what he or she has done? Can anything significant be made of the seven anapests or the six pyrrhic feet, the anapest being the metrical foot that accelerates the poem and the pyrrhic foot being that measure which expresses a literary waste? Joining the words or syllables over which the anapests and pyrrhic feet hover would create a forced interpretation. Still, the beginning of the poem reads rather normally; that is, its reading is consistent with the pronunciation pattern of standard American English. How to account for the relative normalcy of this stanza which expresses such a vicious view of the child to be born?
One possible interpretation can focus on the caesura in the fourth line. The first three and a half lines read almost happily, probably due to the six of seven anapests that can be found in these lines. A noticeable change occurs at the caesura, though. Ten of the eleven trochees in the poem occur after this point in the stanza, and, since the purpose of the trochee is to place the stress first in the reader's mind literally which thus emphasizes the stress of the term uttered figuratively, the heaviness which the balance of the poem suggests can thus be attributed to the meter. What is frightening, though, is that the speaker who communicates the safety of the womb can so suddenly and dramatically transform into one who myopically sees only an evil -- not a "bad", but an evil -- outcome of a pregnancy which some would label "unloved, unwanted". In this poetic and fictive world, it is as though an anti-lifer in contemporary culture has the image of a destructive outcome of an untimely pregnancy ingrained in his or her thinking. Perhaps pro-lifers in society can help him or her see that an alternative reality exists. The child perceived as "unloved, unwanted" need not ineluctably transform him- or herself into a monster; he or she can not only be loved, but also can become a loving member of society.
I could have selected other abortion poems which contain perspectives of other agents or victims in the abortion decision. For example, I could have selected Gwendolyn Brooks' famous 1945 poem "The Mother", perhaps the first poetic literary evidence of post-abortion syndrome, whose refrain "Abortions will not let you forget" reflects the mother's anguish (430). I could have selected Anne Sexton's "The Abortion", first printed in the 1962 anthology All My Pretty Ones, whose refrain is now as famous as that of Brooks' poem: "Somebody who should have been born / is gone" (20; italics in original).12 Finally, I could have chosen Ai's 1999 poem "Abortion" written from the perspective of the father of the aborted child who, despite the fact that the mother of his son has aborted his child, loves her "no matter what you do" (4).13 I would like to focus on Beatty's poem, however, since it is recent and, in my estimation, should be a new addition to the canon of poetry on the first life issue of abortion.
Here is the poem as published in Beatty's collection Mad River with my scansion:14
/- /- /- -/ /-
Rolling side to side in my warm mother,
-/ -- / /- /- //
the juices of life pulsing through my veined skin,
// -- // -/
wild juices of calves' tongues and loose
/- // -/ //
stretchy kid skin like young gray wrens.
// /- /- -- /- //
I drink unborn water in the Garfield back room
-- / /- /- /
in the dark while my mother cries.
-/ -- //
The prodding of wolves' teeth,
// -/ -- /-
eyes red and ailing, the shaking
-/ /- // -/ --
of orange clay and cracked slate, the loosening,
-/ -- / -- / -- //
exposing the underground creatures to full sky,
-/ /- / -- // //
the greased worms are screaming, the dead moles stay dead.
/ -- /-
This is the feeling. (29)
If the stress of the initial trochee signifies heaviness, and if the title were not enough to signify this emotion, then the seriousness of the situation becomes obvious with the six trochaic feet within the first two trochaic pentameter lines.ÊThe next two lines, however, convey heaviness, not because of more trochees, but because the lines have been shortened by two feet and have become burdened with the heavy accents of spondees. Thus, even though the lines are now tetrameter, the spondees continue the heaviness, the tension, originally indicated in the first two lines.ÊThe fifth line of the first stanza, still dominantly trochaic meter, is extended by one foot.ÊI am uncertain which feet need to be emphasized in this line: is it the pyrrhic foot in the middle of the line or the spondees at the beginning and end?ÊAs if to restore the balance that was disturbed by this hexameter line, the last line of the first stanza falls to tetrameter.ÊThe scansion of this last line can be designated in a different way than I have done here, but I hold that the last verb of the stanza, "cries", should be its own monosyllabic foot to emphasize the one action of the mother in the poem (the other actions denote the unborn child's activities and those of the abortionist, "disguised" in the metaphor of a wolf).15
Several technical devices build the drama of the poem's second stanza, the actual attempt of the abortion.ÊFirst, the stanza moves from trimeter to tetrameter to three pentameter lines, falling to dimeter at the stanza's conclusion, ambiguous outcome though it is.ÊFour trochees are evident in this stanza, and other feet accentuate, expand, and increase their heaviness. The four pyrrhic feet accentuate the drama for, being essentially nothing in terms of meter, the pyrrhic feet draw our attention when reading the poem, either verbally or mentally, to those feet with accented syllables.ÊThe four dactyls expand, all within the last three lines, the power of the three words thus highlighted. "Underground creatures" is a metaphoric substitute for unborn children in danger of being attacked by abortionists as viciously as the "worms" and "moles" would be attacked by wolves.ÊThat a dactyl alights over "screaming" helps to draw out the pronunciation of the term, especially poignant since it is followed by two spondees over four alliterative monosyllabic words ("dead moles stay dead").
ÊFinally, the thirteen spondees increase the metaphoric heaviness of both stanzas in two ways.ÊThree of the thirteen spondees ("back room", "wolves' teeth", and "eyes red") pertain to the abortionist.ÊSix of the thirteen spondees ("veined skin", "wild juices", "calves' tongues", "kid skin", "gray wrens", and "I drink") pertain to the unborn child him- or herself.Ê Two would pertain to the unborn child ("dead moles" and "stay dead") if the wolf/abortionist succeeds in getting through the "cracked slate", thus "exposing the underground creatures to" the "full sky".16 Two would pertain to the unborn child ("dead moles" and "stay dead") if the wolf/abortionist succeeds in getting through the "cracked slate", thus "exposing the underground creatures to" the remaining spondee, the "full sky".
Does the abortion occur? The argument can be made that the abortion does not proceed. Although the unborn child expresses what the feeling of being aborted is like, the poem is titled an "attempt". However, that the last line contains only two feet may signify either that the abortion process has been itself aborted or that the child has been killed.
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